I’ve written short stories in the past and have got them critiqued but getting a detailed report from Heena ma’am was a different experience. I’ve made changes as suggested by her and now my story makes a lot more sense. I feel confident about the story now. The best part about her critique is that she has pointed out minor issues as well.
Done with the second round of critique and I hope she’ll accept my request to edit the novel as well.
Thank you, ma’am.